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I'd ask whether this is launchable, but...

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Robkelk (talkcontribs)

... the entry for Ugokie-Ko-Ri-No-Tatehiki says that both of the characters are tanuki. If they are both tanuki, please change 'who turns out to be a tanuki' to 'who turns out to be another tanuki' and mark this as an example of Playing with a Trope. If one or the other is kitsune, the incorrect identification needs to be fixed.

Once that's done, and thanks to Utini501 doing an excellent job of fixing the grammar in the article, this page just might be ready to launch.

Robkelk (talkcontribs)
Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

I've reverted Kuma's last edit, so I think things are back to reasonably readable. This has my vote to launch when the kitsune/tanuki issue is resolved.

Utini501 (talkcontribs)

I did a bit of research, and the extra tanuki bit seems to be a typo. I resolved it, so this trope should definitely be ready to launch if there are no other objections!

And on a similar note, I've done some similar work on a few other Trope Workshop entries: Killer Gorilla, Smarmy Host, and Extendable Arms respectively. Same with All There Is To Know About The Crying Game, but I get the feeling I'll need to add a few more entries before it gets launched. But are the other ones ready to be moved back out of the workshop?

Kuma (talkcontribs)

I first want to say that I am sorry for trying to change your edits. I mistook you for someone else, then I misread the description. I will make sure in the future that I will take your contributions for help, @Utini501. All I ask is for your forgiveness of my ignorance, and I shall improve on it in the future. I also wanted to apologize for causing trouble again to @Looney Toonsand that all I ask from them is their mercy, too. I also wanted to thank @Robkelkfor fixing my error with the example. This all has been very hard on me as I feel like I am alone on my mistakes, especially on this site. My anxiety, my depression, my ASD just gathers, and I am trying my best to improve, but I am not sure how much I have or even if I am. I genuinely apologize for my edits. I agree that it is ready to launch.

Robkelk (talkcontribs)

@Kuma, thank you for fixing the entry for Ugokie-Ko-Ri-No-Tatehiki.

In the case of your earlier edit that was reverted, the best that I can say is that it's an example of what not to do - but I don't have time right now to go into details why.

We have three votes to launch - four if you count mine. Launching this trope now.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

I'm busy, too, but quickly, your edits added subject/verb agreement and verb tense errors, and in trying to simplify sentences garbled them into incomprehensibility.

Kuma (talkcontribs)

Thank you for your advice, I will try to make sure the my sentences are comprehensive.

Looney Toons (talkcontribs)

I think you mean "comprehensible". This is the kind of error that makes your writing difficult at best to read.

Kuma (talkcontribs)

Sorry, I'll also work on my grammar as well.

Robkelk (talkcontribs)

This one, we can help with - The Big List of Booboos and Blunders is a very long list of words that are often confused with each other. Both Looney Toons and I have made mistakes that ended up on that list!

Kuma (talkcontribs)

Thank you for the link, Robkelk. This should help.

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