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The story begins with the introduction of Leif Melyamos, a half-rat half-mouse, whose parents are killed by a mysterious organisation of evil which captures him and declares him to be the "crimson king" (apparently no relation to [[The Dark Tower]] series). They demand he demonstrate his powers, and it's revealed very suddenly that he has the ability to [[Canon Defilement|shoot beams from his paws and teleport, by which fact nobeast seems very surprised for some reason]]. Skip an uncertain amount of time, and Leif has become the leader of the mysterious organisation of evil, despite being a good guy at heart. His rival, Councilman [[Aerith and Bob|Arnold]], is accused of rape and Leif has him arrested, only to have him escape. Luckily Leif is on a date nearby with his fangirl Maiomi, who is supposed to be seventeen but [[Lolicon|acts seven]] because the author can't write female characters convincingly, finds Arnold, and slaughters him messily while in his brand new randomly-appearing monster form, which has horns and wings. Leif then goes on a quest to find his father's magical sword, which demands a sacrifice of blood before it will let him use it. The story ends abruptly there, as the author has not resumed it since.

 

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* [[Adaptation Decay]]: Putting it mildly.

* [[Aerith and Bob]]: Characters' names include Leif, Maoimi, Aveena, Karas, Thrnos, Monroe, and Arnold.

* [[Beige Prose]]: "Ahh he yelled as he slashed him his blood hit the floor."

* [[Black Comedy Rape]]: Unintentionally so.

* [[Boring Invincible Hero]]: There are no opponents who could present any sort of challenge to Leif.

* [[Cardboard Prison]]: Arnold talks his guards into letting him out and joining him in revenge against Leif.

* [[Darker and Edgier]]: Well, at least it's trying to be.

* [[Department of Redundancy Department]]: At one point, Thrnos bows twice in a single run-on sentence.

* [[Large Ham]]: Leif. See "Narm".

* [[Lolicon]]: Seemingly Maoimi, who behaves like a toddler and apparently can't reach above Leif's waist when hugging him.

* [[Most Fanfic Writers Are Girls]]: Averted - the author claimed to be a fifteen-year-old boy. The evidence suggests he is indeed male, but is probably lying about his age, if he's not trolling.

* [[New Powers as the Plot Demands]]

* [[No Ending]]: The author appears to have gotten bored with it, or discouraged by the lack of reviews.

* [[Obligatory Swearing]]

* [[Odd Name Out]]: Arnold. See the MST:

* [[Older Than They Look|Older Than They Sound]]: Maoimi.

* [[One-Winged Angel]]: Leif's bizarre winged transformation, which comes completely out of left field.

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