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{{quote|'''Adam:''' I looked at Sarah, aka Stratogale. Stratogale... Gale-force winds... Galeforces. "Would Galeforces sound good?" I asked.
'''Kate:''' "Yeah, it does sound good," I said. "It does bring Stratogale to mind."
'''Sarah:''' I blushed, naturally. An entire team named after me? They shouldn't have. "Aww, thanks guys," I said. "But even if the team is named after me, I want this to be about all of us. And if Mr. Incredible is ''[[The Incredibles]]<nowiki>'</nowiki>'' leader, Splashdown should be The Galeforces' leader."|[[Author Avatar|Adam]], [[Action Mom|Kate]], and [[Annoying Younger Sibling|Sarah Squall]], naming the new [[Super Family Team]] in town.}}
[[The Incredibles|Violet and Dash Parr]], sibling Supers in training,
And so starts an adventure of a lifetime. Together, the Parrs and the Squalls, as mutual allies, go through all kinds of good-time heroic action involving ticklish situations, no-holds-barred ass-kicking, and new bonds of friendship. And then, of course, the [[Everything's Better With Dinosaurs|dinosaurs]] come in...▼
▲And so starts an adventure of a lifetime. Together, the Parrs and the Squalls, as mutual allies, go through all kinds of good-time heroic action involving ticklish situations, no-holds-barred ass-kicking, and new bonds of friendship. And then, of course, the [[Everything's Better
''[[The Incredibles]]: Rise of the Galeforces'' is an ongoing fanfiction collab by SkarmorySilver, known on [[Deviant ART]] as [http://shadow-aspect.deviantart.com/ Shadow-Aspect], and his good friend [http://georgemiser.deviantart.com/ georgemiser]. It all started with a comment on one of SS's dA deviations, but what blossomed was a groundbreaking fanfiction that explores the backstories and histories of a majority of the late Supers mentioned during the Incredibles movie far better than anything cranked out by the NSA. As a [[Massive Multiplayer Crossover]], it also showcases characters from numerous other franchises. Of course, although it's a relatively local fanfic, it does do a VERY good job in speculating about what the past Supers' lives may have been like, and it certainly is more comprehensive than all of the NSA files on the bonus DVD put together.▼
▲''[[The Incredibles]]: Rise of the Galeforces'' is an ongoing{{when}} fanfiction
The full story is available for reading [http://fav.me/d3j5faq here, starting from Chapter 1.]
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* [[Action Film, Quiet Drama Scene]]: Several occur throughout all three parts. Most of them expose relationships and past histories of the various characters involved.▼
▲* [[Action Film Quiet Drama Scene]]: Several occur throughout all three parts. Most of them expose relationships and past histories of the various characters involved.
* [[Action Girl]]: Sarah and Kate are the standard [[Action Girl]] and [[Action Mom]], respectively.
** [[Faux Action Girl]]: Despite being one of the main characters, Violet doesn't engage in much fighting, and when she does, she mostly plays as the [[Stone Wall]].
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* [[Androcles' Lion|Androcles Pterosaur]]
* [[Annoying Younger Sibling]]: Dash, and to a lesser extent, Sarah.
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* [[Asshole Victim]]: It's implied in Dave's flashback that {{spoiler|Dean Cartman, aka Phylange, almost became this to Hurricane David. The only reason he lived was that Splashdown gave his life to save him, despite the fact that he'd abused him throughout nearly all of their college days together.}}
* [[Author Avatar]]: [[Deadpan Snarker|Adam]], [[Badass Bookworm|ADAM]], ''[[Giant Flyer|ADAM]]'', '''[[Somewhere a Paleontologist Is Crying|ADAM]]'''. SERIOUSLY, HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY NOT SEE THIS COMING?!
* [[Back
* [[Badass Adorable]]: All of the children, but especially the younger 'uns. Vi and Adam seem to lean more towards Badass [[Adorkable]].
* [[Badass Bookworm]]: Adam, particularly where dinosaurs are concerned. It leads to a lot of [[Somewhere a Paleontologist Is Crying]] jokes whenever he's around.
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** In a similar manner, Dash does ''NOT'' like being called a morsel. {{spoiler|Velociripper calls him that when [[Eats Babies|he's trying to devour him.]] And gets roasted.}}
* [[Beware the Nice Ones]]: We ARE dealing with superheroes here...
* [[Blow You Away]]: Adam, mostly in the [[Wind
* [[Cape Snag]]: Invoked in Chapter 3. Sarah and David both know that their original decision was a stupid idea, so they decide to exclude it in their new costume design.
* [[Captain Ersatz]]/[[Expy]]
** Splashdown is [[
** Sarah is [[Power Girl]], though without the [[Super Toughness]].
** Thunderhead is [[The Mighty Thor|Thor]], only [[Dumb Muscle|dumber.]] He also smacks of [[The Emperor's New Groove
** Taking all the above into consideration, this leaves Adam as the only member of the Squall family without a comic book analogue. Instead, his powers and personality are more likely akin to [[Twilight (
** On the villain's side, [[Word of God]] has stated that Velociripper is [[Death Note
* [[Casual Danger Dialog]]: Pretty much guaranteed whenever Adam's around.
* [[The Chew Toy]]: Whenever Adam is in the vicinity of anything to do with [[Everything's Better
* [[Clones Are People, Too]]: Probably the reason why this fanfiction exists.
* [[Competitive Balance]]
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** [[Stone Wall]]: Vi, when she's in her force field at least, though she straddles the line between this and [[Jack of All Stats]] from time to time.
* [[Cowardly Lion]]: Kate.
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* [[Crouching Moron, Hidden Badass]]: Thunderhead. Remember that his name's a [[Stealth Pun]] on the word {{spoiler|"dunderhead"}}...
* [[Cute Bruiser]]: Sarah, [[Captain Obvious|of course.]]
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* [[Eats Babies]]: Velociripper almost succeeds in killing and devouring Dash during the museum scene, and even calls him a "morsel." {{spoiler|He gets roasted, [[Berserk Button|naturally.]]}}
* Everything Is...
** [[Everything's Better
** [[Everything's Better
** [[Reptiles Are Abhorrent|...Worse With Reptiles]] ([[Feathered Fiend|And Birds]] <ref>
** [[Everything's Even Worse
* [[Foot Focus]]: A lot of the characters take their shoes off from time to time, and much attention is paid to their feet by other characters as well as the narrative. Keep in mind that this fanfic was originally supposed to be part of the [[Fetish Fuel|tickling fandom]], so this is somewhat justified.
* [[For Science!]]: The motivation of InGen's geneticists, which plays them directly into Aperture's hands.
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* [[Gone Horribly Right]]
* [[Gravity Master]]: Kate.
* [[Half-Human Hybrid]]: Adam, {{spoiler|aka Sarah's [[Opposite
* [[Heroic BSOD]]: Sarah gets one {{spoiler|after finding out that her mom has been possessed by Aperture.}}
* [[Heroic Sacrifice]]: Adam averts this due to his [[Iron Butt Monkey]] status. {{spoiler|It's almost played straight at the end of Part I though.}}
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* [[Iron Butt Monkey]]: If you're as unlucky as Adam, a [[Healing Factor]] sure comes in handy.
* [[It Can Think]]: The raptors in a nutshell. [[Humanity Ensues|Velociripper, naturally, takes it to its logical conclusion.]]
* [[Kill All Humans]]: Velociripper's solution to his percieved [[Humans Are
* [[Lego Genetics]]: Aperture's technology is based on this. It's one of the reasons why they can construct Adam, {{spoiler|Sarah's [[Ptero-Soarer]] [[Opposite
* [[Limited Wardrobe]]: Few of the characters ever change their clothes. They just have one or two choices of civilian outfits, their Super outfits, and that's it.
* [[Made of Iron]]: Almost EVERYTHING Adam goes through [[Infant Immortality|would have killed a grown man]]. Justified in that he has a [[Healing Factor]] as one of his powers.
* [[Magnificent Bastard]]: Velociripper. As Adam so beautifully puts it, [[I Am a Humanitarian|"he won't hesistate to kill anyone who stands in his way."]]
* [[Make Me Wanna Shout]]/[[Gale Force Sound]]: ANYONE who has sound manipulation as part of their abilities usually uses it to knock mooks away. Most Supers use the [[Make Me Wanna Shout]] variety, but Adam can also use the [[Gale Force Sound]] version, sometimes combined with [[Wind
* [[Making a Splash]]: David.
* [[Mama Bear]] and [[Papa Wolf]]: Both the Parr and Squall families are ''not'' going to let ''anyone'' hurt or take their kids away.
* [[Mega Crossover]]: While this is an Incredibles fanfiction, other franchises to be featured include [[Portal (
* [[Ninja Pirate Zombie Robot]]: [[Raptor Attack|Velociraptors]] [[X Meets Y|with]] [[More Dakka|GUNS.]] [[What Do You Mean It's Not Awesome?]]
* [[Non-Malicious Monster]]: Save for the [[
* [[Noodle Incident]]: At the very beginning of the story, Dash narrates that he discovered his [[Shock and Awe|static-charge powers]] when he accidentally set the Parrs' lawn on fire.
* [[Oh Crap]]: "I saw the yellow eyes with their [[Hellish Pupils|reptilian slits for pupils,]] [[This Is Gonna Suck|and felt a chill of horror running down my spine."]]
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** {{spoiler|When Apogee first appears, she's already been possessed by Aperture (and it takes a little while for the Parrs to restore her back to normal). Naturally, this causes Colonel Pluck to respond with an understandably frightened, "Oh, ''no!'' [[Captain Obvious|It's already started to sink in!"]]}}
* [[One-Winged Angel]]: Or rather, ''two'' winged, in Adam's case. [[It Makes Sense in Context]].
* {{spoiler|[[Opposite
* [[People Jars]]
* [[Red Eyes, Take Warning]], with [[Hellish Pupils]] for extra measure: Most things under Aperture's care have glowing red eyes, which tend to creep the hell out of most of the characters.
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* [[Shown Their Work]]: [[Word of God]] is surprisingly up to date with the paleontological evidence of the present day.
* [[Slasher Smile]]: Velociripper. [[More Teeth Than the Osmond Family|Dear lord,]] ''[[High Octane Nightmare Fuel|VELOCIRIPPER.]]''
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* [[Somewhere a Palaeontologist Is Crying]]: As in the case of the original JP movies, any and all paleontological errors are justified by InGen's (and later {{spoiler|[[Portal (
** [[Ptero-Soarer]]: Despite being billed as a ''Pteranodon'', Adam's pterosaur form [http://fav.me/d3jrbr5 barely even looks like one.] However, both he and [[Word of God]] clearly [[Hand Wave]] this with the [[It Makes Sense in Context|perfectly acceptable excuse]] of being an Aperture bio-weapon.
** [[Raptor Attack]]: The ''Deinonychus'' are oversized, featherless, and seriously deformed. Velociripper, however, is clearly stated to have [[Feathered Fiend|bird-like, blood-red plumage,]] which leads into the [[Funny Aneurysm]] moment above.
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* [[Those Two Guys]]: Splashdown and Thunderhead. Although they ARE technically among the main cast, their roles are still relatively minor enough to qualify.
* [[Tickle Torture]]: Glados loves to use this interrogation method on her test subjects. It helps to know that this fanfiction originally stemmed from the [[Fetish Fuel|tickling fandom,]] so it's only natural that there are a few playful tickle scenes as well.
* [[Took a Level
* [[What Could Have Been]]: Basically, the authors decided, "What would happen if the various late Supers were resurrected from the dead?" And yes, both [[Hilarity Ensues|hilarity]] ''AND'' [[Reality Ensues|reality]] did indeed ensue.
* [[What Could Possibly Go Wrong?]]: Aperture's entire modus operandi runs on this. {{spoiler|It doesn't take into account the Supers that escaped its confines, of course...}}
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