Sailor Sun/YMMV


 * Ass Pull - The revealing of Honey's origin in Story 7. Some have seen it as quite disappointing and underwhelming compared to the buildup and mystery of the previous three years worth of storyline. It also Jossed nearly every theory about Honey up to that point as well.
 * For those who want to know,
 * Making it even more odd,
 * Marty Stu / Mary Sue - Brad / Bay in the original fanfiction (but NOT in the webcomic) starts as a Marty Stu and ends up a Mary Sue due to the gender-bending powers of an Ancient Artifact.
 * Squick - All of the comics where amnesiac-Bay (as 'Brad') is attracted to her own daughter. Honey is just as squicked as the audience.
 * Tear Jerker -
 * A second one later, when Bay returns to Ottawa
 * Unnecessary Makeover - Honey (twice, by different means), despite being both very attractive and intelligent, is envious of her mother's figure and beauty. Steve's comment in this comic about her disguised form really doesn't help things much.