My Really Great Code Geass Fic/YMMV

Work can be seen here.
 * Ass Pull: It’s painfully obvious that the author makes up the whole thing as she goes.
 * Canon Defilement
 * Fetish Retardant: When Lloyd and Suzaku have sex, Lloyd "grabbed a handfull of brown stuff from a bowl and threw it on his thingy before going in". WHAT?!!
 * God Mode Sue: C.C. offers this power to Alys but it may not be quite what it seems...
 * Mary Sue: Alys, along with loads of Wish Fulfillment