Pattycakes/Nightmare Fuel


 * The very idea of having a trusted friend kidnap you, hold you prisoner, drug you into a weakened state of mind and body, and then subjecting you to all kinds of humiliating and demeaning Age Play against your will is terrifying in and of itself. The author of this story plays the angle or everything it's worth to make the Mind Rape of Rainbow Dash a read that you will lose sleep over.
 * Further explaining, Dash is completely in-character in the first story, so the reader gets to watch as the spirited tomboy with dreams of becoming a Wonderbolt have her mind destroyed and turned into an incontinent Adult Child.
 * This fic made a diaper getting used horrifying, because it means that Crazyshy's treatment is settling into Dash's mind.
 * The foalmula. A drug that is completely undetectable and can be put in anything. Anything. That will completely destroy your mind and make you a completely dependent Adult Child. That alone is all kinds of Paranoia Fuel that will have readers eyeing their orange juice suspiciously for years to come.
 * Worse yet, is the dose is strong enough, the process will be permanent. Depending on the ending you get in Part Two, up to two ponies will have gotten this kind of dosage.
 * The foalmula is a mind-altering drug that strips away inhibitions and adult, rational thought, and if in strong enough doses, can damage the brain enough that the victim is rendered infantile forever. Stew on that long enough and you can say goodbye to a good night's sleep.
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