Thread:User talk:Beta Log 86/The grammar of some of your edits is really poor/reply (3)

I understand that, but our main concern is your sentence structure. For example:

Triple H (Wrestling) Your edit:


 * Don't hit his wife. It's a sure fire way to get him to beating you down,  even if you was tossed to her by  another wreslter by chance.
 * Don't even try to offer to take on his wife either, somebody tried in hopes of having challenge a match with him. How did Triple H and Stephanie handed this... get some  get enforcement of course, though...

You use a lot of improper word tenses and malapropisms (improper words) in these sentences, as well as not ending sentence with proper punctuation. Here's how to fix that:


 * Don't hit his wife. It's a sure fire way to get him to beat you down,  even if you were tossed to her by  another wrestler by chance.


 * Don't even try to offer to take on his wife either, somebody tried in hopes of having a match with him. How did Triple H and Stephanie handle this?  They got some enforcement of course.

My suggestion is to speak what you are about to say in your mind before writing it. If it sounds inappropriate in your head, you need to fix it.