Sweet Jade and Hella John/YMMV


 * Arc Fatigue: The Mario Intermission. Intermission Act Two alone has lasted over three hundred and fifty pages, and it's aknowledged by the creator as more of the exposition for the real story. And there's an intermission within the intermission and one more act after that. What makes matters worse is that there was only one page before it began; so the story basically starts out on it and we're introduced to the Mario aspects of the world first whereas things such as the kids' neighborhood only get passing reffrences. What makes matters worse was that this intermission was originally intended to be extremely short and simple back when the comic was in its early stages. And, as it stands, most of it up to late into IA2 was actually rushed.
 * The Shipping Intermission itself. Pikmin Fan only wanted it to last about fourty pages (not much longer than Intermission Act One), but it turned out being over seventy. He said he wanted to
 * Badass Decay: Vriska. Karma list. Nothing more needs to be said.
 * Hilarious in Hindsight:
 * Twice, John "combines" but avoids "fuse combining" because he doesn't want to think about what would happen if he fused with Yoshi or Jade and his FIRE counterpart. Speaking of "fuse combining..."
 * Worth mentioning: SJAHJ actually uses the "Over Nine Thousand" meme before Homestuck itself does.