Nature of Nature's Art/YMMV


 * Alas, Poor Villain: The manner in which some of the Venom 8 die tends to provoke this reaction in readers. Lycosa's complete lack of empathy in turn is practically a chronic Kick the Dog moment.
 * Alternate Character Interpretation: It's clear that SV is an Unreliable Narrator, but how unreliable is he?
 * Moral Event Horizon:
 * Narm:
 * An earlier version of 10%+ had very strong coarse language; this was changed to make it more approachable to a wider audience. Now, this in itself isn't bad. However, one of Polarizing's lines changed from "smashed against the fucking wall" to... "smashed against the far-flung wall". Really?
 * One page of Secretary has a facture which looks like it's named "pee". (It's actually "spee".)
 * What an Idiot!: Polarizing spends an awful lot of time talking and boasting about the things he can do to Quintet, instead of actually doing most of them. Arguably justified somewhat in that he probably doesn't want to actually kill her,