Earth and Sky (fanfic)/YMMV

Earth and Sky (MLP fanfic)

 * Harsher in Hindsight: Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in Windfall. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along,
 * Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his family situation into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.