The Chocolate War/YMMV


 * Complete Monster: Archie Costello, the unofficial leader of the Vigils. Think Keyzer Soze as a teenager.
 * Laurie in the second book even says that "there's a monster in Trinity, who runs the school like a Mafia and makes the other guys do the grossest things". What makes Archie so terrifying is his cold intelligence, subtlety, and total lack of sympathy for his victims. Janza, on the other hand, is a brutal and stupid tool of the Vigils.
 * Speaking of Janza, he's basically a Blood Knight in a teenagers body without any redeeming qualities. In The Chocolate War, he reflects that he "gets horny" beating people up. This is expounded upon in Beyond The Chocolate War.
 * Ensemble Darkhorse: Obie and Archie. Jerry is actually the main character of the first book but just look at how much he's mentions compared to these two.
 * Foe Yay: Jerry/Janza and especially Obie/Archie.
 * Fridge Brilliance: Archie's actions at the end of Beyond The Chocolate War;
 * Magnificent Bastard: In the second book, Archie finally draws a black marble and is forced take his own assignment to be "the Fool" on Fair Day. One of the things the Fool has to do is sit on a chair while the other students throw water balloons at him. Only one guy dares to do it, and he misses Archie on purpose....
 * Moment of Awesome: Henry Malloran gets one in the second book when he throws a tomato into Brother Leon's face before the entire school, and then becomes class president with no opposition.
 * However, the biggest Moment of Awesome belongs to Carter, also in the second book - he fills the Assigner's box with four black marbles and one white. When Archie draws a black one for the first time, there is only a shocked silence.
 * What where's the fact that in the second book
 * Moral Event Horizon: Archie crosses it in the end of the first book when he manipulates the whole school into turning against Jerry, even though the chocolate sales are over, and gets Jerry beaten within an inch of his life. In the second book, he gives the overweight Tubs the "assignment" to gain thirty pounds more, and it's even worse because Tubs hates himself for being fat.
 * He crosses it over again in the very end, when he (via his proxy Bunting) moves the Vigils towards becoming a violent gang that extorts students and sells drugs,