Hidden Prophices/YMMV

""NO!, my love, I will avenge your death!" Tranquila cried. Tears streamed down her face, and she collapsed to the ground by her dying lover.
 * Accidental Innuendo: The author didn't know what the word rape meant until after she used it.
 * Mary Sue: Moonshimmer, and also Tranquildream to some extent.
 * Black Hole Sue: This is Moonshimmer for sure. Everyone wants her to be their leader, and they think she is their 'chosen one'.
 * Purity Sue: Both Moonshimmer and her sister Tranquildream.
 * Narm: Barely a sentence goes by without it being narm-y.
 * Particularly.

"There's nothing you can do, Tranquilpaw!" the blue-gray tom said. "Take care of our kits and remember I love you forever, even when I am in StarClan!" And then Tranquilpaw kissed him one last time and then his eyes closed and then he was gone."

"""Stop it! We can not do this! I will not fight! I am a pacifier!" Screamed. Her fur was prickling and her purple eyes were wide and the moon on her forehead was beginning to glow. Sometimes it did that when there was danger around her!
 * And the fight between.

" ran towards   and used her elemental powers! She made weeds and vines grow out of the ground and wrap around   paws!   struggled to get out of them and she let out a huge rainbow burst of energy that destroyed all of the vines! She looked super mad now!”"