Neon Exodus Evangelion/YMMV


 * Fridge Brilliance: Rei, Ichi, San, and so forth for the Ayanami clones.
 * The point/mark tactical system used by the Evangelions is a weird departure from how the show handles it... until it is revealed that NERV is descended partially or wholly from X-Com. Spotter/Sniper is one of the major tactics advocated by veteran players of X-Com: Enemy Unknown.
 * Growing the Beard: Those who've read the story the whole way through generally agree that it gets better the more it diverges from the source material. In particular, Croft's Marty Stu status gets ripped to shreds during.
 * That's assuming you get that far. It's arguably more likely for one to Rage Quit the fic long before that, reducing the beard into a too little, too late fuzz of chin-down.
 * If he was claustrophobic, it should have kicked in several times already. That's just an Ass Pull.
 * Marty Stu: DJ Croft, possibly; Jon Ellison, most likely not.
 * Opinions on Croft's Marty Stu status seem to be split between those who hate the series and those who like it. This is still a hotly-debated issue among Eva fans years after the series ended; bringing it up in an Eva community will very likely result in Internet Backdraft.
 * Unfortunate Implications: The utterly gross treatment of women in this fic, specially . And here are the reasons why. (Trigger for.