Narm/Webcomics



Dramatic tension is good for pulling in new viewers to a webcomic. It doesn't always work out that way, though.

Another thing that doesn't always happen is people agreeing (often due to Fan Dumb on all sides). Be warned that some of the opinions expressed here are a bit... extreme. Webcomics tend to draw quite polarizing views and many people are quite vocal about them. Some people just don't like these webcomics, and we all know being horrible about something you hate is soothing. Others are dedicated fans who twitch whenever they hear criticism, no matter how valid or witty. So don't trust this page: read the comics!

""You slept with...? Wait! That's it!""
 * Most of the "drama" in Roomies and It's Walky is either Narm or Wall Banger material. Roomies was generally agreed to be Cerebus Syndrome gone bad, but It's Walky never seemed to figure out what it was trying to do. Whether it be the over-the-top Wangst of Sal (complete with a distracting, out of place accent), the seriousness with which Joyce's "innocence" is given (complete with trauma over forcibly being shown generic porn) that requires ignoring other events to work, the on and off competency/seriousness of the Saturday-morning cartoon-style alien villains, or the excessive amount of time spent mourning the pointless deaths of all the designated victims, the only consistent reaction is to roll one's eyes at it all. At least the comedic parts work fairly well when they shows up.
 * Ellen describing her "second life" in El Goonish Shive would have worked wonders as a dramatic climax... but gets shoved forcibly into this territory when you realize that, aside from one reference almost two years prior, none of what she's talking about was hinted at before the Info Dump. By the time she starts discussing Archie, the chimera without a sex drive, you'll find it impossible to take it seriously.
 * Of course, that's how Dan lulls into distraction the readers with short attention span. Archie was  foreshadowing that became more and more transparent later.
 * This troper would like to note that it works a lot better when Archive Binging.
 * Also there is a moment when Catalina asks  Susan declines, and Catalina runs off. This was a dramatic moment... right up until Catalina says "Assjack!" (A reversal of the highly temperamental Genki Girl's favorite word, "Jackass(es)!")
 * Though this might have been intended.
 * While Dan did state that he had no intention of drawing the fight between, the end of the "fight" was abrupt enough to give one whiplash, especially given 's line  If there had been one or two Beat Panels, then the whiplash would probably have hurt less.
 * It is utterly impossible to take an eldritch abomination which has chosen to call itself  seriously. It's the kind of thing a disaffected goth girl would come up with, not a.
 * Isn't she a Fae? Within that context it makes sense, since Fae tend to be unoriginal.
 * That's unoriginal for a writer, but it's probably too original for a Fae. It's that third name that kills it.
 * "Raven" is the only actually meaningful (playing for a large picture) part.
 * Ellen's song in the Birthday Party arc was painfully cheesy. First off, singing scenes in comics are probably impossible to do well. Secondly, she chooses a song to tell how she feels, because serenading your loved one is never sappy. Thirdly, she scores a perfect 100 after the song's done. She must have put her soul into it.
 * Dominic Deegan: A woman's misplaced hatred caused her to attempt to kill several people by slowly freezing them to death. She is thwarted by the protagonist's brother, who channels his magic into becoming SuperGreg, modeled on his comic book hero SuperMage, himself a Captain Ersatz for Superman. The Mood Whiplash never settled.
 * Also noteworthy is this much parodied strip. Spoilers in that strip! Be warned!
 * Mookie's topped himself.

""Aw, no. Chief.""
 * Jacob's revelation that "Death is not zombies" could have been worded better.
 * When Cthulhu-TIM and Celesto were tearing up Lynn's Brook for some time, there's a scene where Dex and his ex-wife are desperately cowering behind a piece of rubble as people all around them are getting slaughtered. It would have been a much more emotionally powerful scene if the people getting slaughtered looked more like they were desperately running for cover and less like they were out for a casual morning stroll.
 * The page image above is from Incontinent Student Bodies, a parody of Associated Student Bodies. One of the characters is playing with his friends and then suddenly pisses and shits himself, at which point he screams "BAWWWWW!" and starts to cry. This was a grown man--or bunny rather--by the way.
 * The Very Special Episode of Ctrl+Alt+Del, in which Ethan's girlfriend Lilah has a Convenient Miscarriage. This happened in a webcomic in which the main character built a wacky human-hating robot out of an X Box and who was once crowned the King of Gaming after an evil company that wanted to exploit the fictional gamer holiday of "Winter-een-mas". It doesn't help that the main character has an argument with the robot during the Very Special Episode which is played completely seriously (and, for no good reason, off-screen). And if you read the lulzy edits of the comic, then you can never take the original seriously again.
 * The Very Special Episode was particularly special; for some, its narm made it the funniest Ctrl+Alt+Del storyline ever.
 * The recent wedding arc might as well be Narm incarnate. From the vows ("Life dropped an epic husband") to the Hawaiian Mafia(?), it's just jam-packed.
 * Let us not forget the Take That episode against Jack Thompson. The appearance of Tim Buckley's Author Avatar, the hypocrisy of his statements ("How dare you call video gamers violent! Don't fuck with us!") and the overwrought writing launched it straight into the Narmosphere.
 * The bottom row of this Goblins comic.
 * Given the length between updates, anything that doesn't move the plot forward has a good chance of failing to work as intended, so this example may be less narmful in an Archive Binge.
 * Hell, the Art style itself can be narmy. The body proportions and reactions are so exaggerated!
 * Everything about Chief's death. The initial reaction is over-the-top, and then Thac0 delivers this priceless line:

"I can't stop shooting! It hurts to stop! It hurts to stop! :'("
 * The excessive amounts of gore, the ridiculous facial expressions, how the characters try to pull of a Big Damn Heroes moment or badass pose every other strip... yeah, this comic is really narmy.
 * Depending on who you talk to, Jack is either prime Nightmare Fuel or Narm Incarnate. Between the cartoony art, the constant over-the-top attempts to address shocking issues, and story arcs like the Rape Arena, Jack has earned many a derisive snort and angry fist-shake over the years. And, oh, yes, it's furry, which is another chip in the pile for some.
 * Tales of the Questor... when the green fairy gives Quentyn her True Name.
 * And the author would have done the same for the blue fairy's true name-- if he could have found a beverage that went by the appropriate name...
 * PS238:

""Look at this old fountain... DROWN YOURSELF IN IT!""
 * Considering it's a webcomic that underwent heavy Cerebus Syndrome while retaining a cartoony, stick-figure-based art style, you'd think Order of the Stick would be awash in Narm; surprisingly, it mostly dodges it. However, Bozzok's attempt at a Bond One-Liner--"I'm bringing the onions...to make you cry!"--is wince-worthy, and if it was supposed to be so on purpose, then it was still too bad to be So Bad It's Good. The Thieves' Guild in general is narmy because everyone acts as if they're a credible threat with far-reaching plot implications...and then they go down like a kobold with a lung infection.
 * Hinjo's speech to Miko here. It's clear to the reader that Miko was wrong to, and so seeing Hinjo explain why it was wrong in such great detail is annoying. Especially cringe-worthy is the line "yours. were.," where each word gets its own voice bubble. It wasn't clear to all the readers that Miko was wrong, unfortunately. Hinjo had to explain things both to the Misaimed Fandom and to the crazy lady with the sharp sword.
 * In the Megatokyo strip "a rare thing these days", it was revealed that This reveal would have been more shocking had, who appears several strips before , not looked almost exactly like him. It spoils the plot point just before it appears because the reader now expects  to be there.
 * Rumisiel's rant in Misfile was meant to be awe-inspiring, but "I'm a frikkin' angel, babe, and I got nothin' to lose" came off as just plain cheesy.
 * Emily's expression. That is all.
 * Or Vashiel in the lower left hand panel. He looks like he's trying with all of his might to take a dump.
 * When Ash reluctantly agrees to do his "duty" as King of the mountain, this happens. Uh... okay?
 * In Abstract Gender, Brian's mother is shot and killed. This is supposed to be the single most tragic event. But it feels random and a little silly.
 * It's like the author spun the Convenient Cliched Dramatic Death Wheel and landed on "mugging gone wrong" between "skiing accident" and "plane crash"
 * In this page of Harkovast, many people found Shogun's expression of rage in the final panel more comical then anything else.
 * How about this page? There's the, uh, wolf's face in the third panel, and this line:

"Citizen: Wow! It's so great that I avoided dying! I'll celebrate by closing the blast-doors!"
 * The 4U City arc of Sluggy Freelance is full of clunky dialogue due to the fact that the government has everyone on ridiculously high levels of antidepressants and risk a more permanent version of being sent to the cornfield if they are not happy enough. A particularly good example:


 * Anders Loves Maria. The sheer amount of human misery hoisted upon these characters goes past the point of believability when
 * A less obvious example in this recent strip of Supernormal Step. It features a freaky girl appearing on some screens and singing a song that's really creepy... until you realize that it perfectly fits the meter of the Gilligan's Isle theme tune. At which point it becomes hilarious.
 * During its run, Supermassive Black Hole a Star had an art shift to a darker, Film Noir art style. While some characters' looks were tweaked slightly, others weren't, resulting in dramatic lighting for a character whose nose is bigger than the entire rest of his head.
 * "WOW!﻿ Hot﻿ a What Baabhabhiat"
 * Homestuck is mostly too humourous, snarky and intentionally Narmy (in places) to fall into this, but has its moments.
 * When Jade is comforting Jadesprite, who Came Back Wrong, hates being alive and is unable to stop crying, the fact that her tears are rendered in chatlog style as 'BOO HOO HOO HOO HOO. woof :'(' somewhat lessens the genuine tragedy. It doesn't help that a few pages later, Karkat starts imagining Jade and Jadesprite making out.
 * But then, considering it was half leading up to the callback of having Jadesprite echo alternate-future-daves conversation with Calsprite, and the point and that her dreamself is rather overly emotional and flighty about things that Jade herself is not...it does all make it a rather less tragic either way.
 * Also, when Karkat reveals that